@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the months of February and March 2024.
 message. He suggested converting the error message to start with a
 lowercase letter as our guidelines for error messages recommend.
 
-Harmen, then sent
+Harmen then sent
 [a version 2 of his ](https://lore.kernel.org/git/[email protected]/)
 which didn't change any `po/*.po` file and had the error message
 start with a lowercase letter. Patrick reviewed that and found
@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ This edition covers what happened during the months of February and March 2024.
 notes using plaintext. Soon after I had the idea of converting these
 plaintext notes to prettified outlines, so I needed a way to convert
 them to HTML. For better or worse, all this happened before I
-discovered Emacs and Orgmode (or even Markdown).
+discovered Emacs and Org mode (or even Markdown).
 
 Anyway, I first wrote a plaintext-to-HTML converter in Ruby. Then I
 rewrote it in C just for fun. Then again in Haskell (using a minimal
-subset of Orgmode syntax). As you can see, I sort of got carried away,
+subset of Org mode syntax). As you can see, I sort of got carried away,
 haha.
 
 I would go on to write dozens of pet projects (rudimentary chess
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the months of February and March 2024.
 to browse the mailing list emails (which I sync to Gmail with
 [lieer](https://.com/gauteh/lieer)).
 
-I use Orgmode in Emacs heavily for organizing code snippets and ideas.
+I use Org mode in Emacs heavily for organizing code snippets and ideas.
 
 Last but not least, I use [tmux](https://.com/tmux/tmux/wiki) to organize terminal windows and
 navigate quickly across them, even if I'm not using SSH.
@@ -329,11 +329,11 @@ __Light reading__
 * Julia Evans continues her series of blog posts about Git with
 [How HEAD works in git](https://jvns.ca/blog/2024/03/08/how-head-works-in-git/) and
 [The "current branch" in git](https://jvns.ca/blog/2024/03/22/the-current-branch-in-git/).
-The first entry in this series of blog posts can be found
+The first entry in this series of blog posts can be found
 in [Git Rev News Edition #103](https://git..io/rev_news/2023/09/30/edition-103/).
 * [Keeping repository maintainer information accurate](https://.blog/2024-03-04-keeping-repository-maintainer-information-accurate/):
-ensuring that [CODEOWNERS file](https://docs..com/repositories/managing-your-repositorys-settings-and-features/customizing-your-repository/about-code-owners)
-is up to date with the help of tools like the [cleanowners](https://.com//cleanowners) tool.
+ensuring that the [CODEOWNERS file](https://docs..com/repositories/managing-your-repositorys-settings-and-features/customizing-your-repository/about-code-owners)
+is up to date with the help of tools like [cleanowners](https://.com//cleanowners).
 By Zack Koppert on Blog.
 * [De Programmatica Ipsum, Issue #66: Version Control - Twenty Years Is Nothing](https://deprogrammaticaipsum.com/twenty-years-is-nothing/)
 by Adrian Kosmaczewski.
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ __Light reading__
 * [Five Ways to Be More Productive with Git](https://laravel-news.com/five-ways-to-be-more-productive-with-git)
 by Paul Redmond on Laravel News blog. The blog post lists
 a few useful Git aliases, setting up a commit template, using password manager for SSH keys
-(that can be used for signing commits), making use of CLI tool (`gh`),
+(that can be used for signing commits), making use of the CLI tool (`gh`),
 and configuring `mergetool` and `difftool`.
 * [Git: programmatic staging](https://choly.ca/post/git-programmatic-staging/)
 (with the help of the [`expect`](https://linux.die.net/man/1/expect) tool,
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ __Light reading__
 by the same author mentions other similar tools, namely
 [CodeQL](https://codeql..com/) (mentioned in passing
 in [Git Rev News Edition #79](https://git..io/rev_news/2021/09/30/edition-79/)),
-and [Comby](https://comby.dev/). It also talks about newly created
+and [Comby](https://comby.dev/). It also talks about the newly created
 [`semgrepx`](https://.com/icholy/semgrepx) tool for rewriting `semgrep` matches
 using externals tools (such as Datasette's [`llm`](https://llm.datasette.io/) CLI tool
 and Python library).
@@ -406,22 +406,22 @@ __Git tools and sites__
 * Compare and contrast with [git-vain](https://git.anna.lgbt/anna/git-vain)
 (mentioned in [Git Rev News Edition #103](https://git..io/rev_news/2023/09/30/edition-103/))
 and [git-vanity-sha](https://.com/mattbaker/git-vanity-sha)
-(mentioned in [Git Rev News Edition #39](https://git..io/rev_news/2018/05/16/edition-39/))
-tools to generate vanity hashes, for example to make SHA-1 hash of the HEAD begin with `c0ffee`.
+(mentioned in [Git Rev News Edition #39](https://git..io/rev_news/2018/05/16/edition-39/)),
+tools to generate vanity hashes (for example to make the SHA-1 hash of HEAD begin with `c0ffee`).
 * [Nosey Parker](https://.com/praetorian-inc/noseyparker/) is a command-line program
 that finds secrets and sensitive information in textual data and Git history.
 Written in Rust, under Apache 2.0 license.
 * [gitu](https://.com/altsem/gitu) - a TUI Git client inspired by Magit.
 Written in Rust, under MIT license.
-* [Vim-Flog](https://.com/rbong/vim-flog) is a powerful git branch viewer for Vim.
-In Vim 8/9, it requires LuaJIT (preferred) or Lua installed.
+* [Vim-Flog](https://.com/rbong/vim-flog) is a powerful Git branch viewer for Vim.
+Requires Neovim or Vim with Lua support.
 * [gcd](https://.com/davvid/gcd) - Git worktree navigator,
 lets you quickly navigate to Git worktrees on your filesystem,
-and quickly navigate to directories within your current worktree.
-Written as a set of shell functions, to be sourced into `~/.zshrc` or `~/.bashrc`.
-* [grepdiff](https://pkg.go.dev/rsc.io/grepdiff) is a command line tool that reads unified diffs
+and to directories within your current worktree.
+Written as a set of shell functions to be sourced into `~/.zshrc` or `~/.bashrc`.
+* [grepdiff](https://pkg.go.dev/rsc.io/grepdiff) is a command-line tool that reads unified diffs
 from the files passed as arguments (or standard input), and prints a reduced diff
-containing only the hunks matching the regular expression. Written in Go.
+containing only the hunks matching a regular expression. Written in Go.
 * [Gitstr](https://.com/fiatjaf/gitstr) is a tool to send and receive Git es
 over [Nostr][], using [NIP-34](https://.com/nostr-protocol/nips/pull/997).
 * Compare and contrast with [git-ssb](https://scuttlebot.io/apis/community/git-ssb.html)