@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@ involving knowledge of several components and APIs:
 as interacting with the filesystem, sockets, timers, and system events. libuv
 also provides a threading abstraction similar to POSIX threads for
 more sophisticated asynchronous addons that need to move beyond the
-standard event loop. Addon authors are encouraged to think about how to
+standard event loop. Addon authors should
 avoid blocking the event loop with I/O or other time-intensive tasks by
-off-loading work via libuv to non-blocking system operations, worker threads
-or a custom use of libuv's threads.
+offloading work via libuv to non-blocking system operations, worker threads,
+or a custom use of libuv threads.
 
 * Internal Node.js libraries. Node.js itself exports C++ APIs that addons can
 use, the most important of which is the `node::ObjectWrap` class.